Looks better! But you still need a tighter shot of the sugar in the bowl. Do you normally eat in front of the microwave like that? It almost looks like you plan to watch something cooking as you eat. The shot where your head looks in closer, that angle is a little weird because we then see the back of your head, a blurry back of your head at that. Could that be shot from a different angle? Music still cuts off at the end without fading. You can actually click on the end of the song and a triangle will appear....slide that triangle to the left and you should see a line that shows up that curves to the bottom which will fade the song. Titles need to be bigger. We need to see them better and you may want to try out some different color combinations to see which one stands out the most. Getting better!